Reviews for Ode to Baby's Romance

Jon Blue 2008-04-11 ch 1,	abusewow that's clever... __You're everything any cliché could call logical like that. and the next line is amazing as well. hmm...I think that the last stanza should be seperated to leave a longer pause in between the first line and the second.
fatbird33 2008-03-23 ch 1,	abuse"If you were not so non-existent" i liked this line. it was well written, but the title was odd.