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Reviews For: Look to the Stars for Love

Alycia Beverly
2008-04-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseOMG girl this so good...it's rele intersting I cant wait until u finish so I can read the whole thing
marinawings
2008-03-31
ch 2,
abusegreat chapter! braxton is an intriguing character. and he sounds attractive! the universe you've created here is very believable. i like the the little details. keep up the good work!
marinawings
2008-03-29
ch 1,
abusethis story is very good so far. i am already loving the plot. make sure to look out for grammar/spelling errors. those tend to creep in on even the best of us. the story started off a bit quickly, but to me, that's far better than starting off too slowly. and i already like your characters. elena and her dad are very realistic, and of course, what girl doesn't like reading about a good-looking guy crash landing in her yard from outer space? keep up the good work! this is most certainly going in my C2.
DiaRose
2008-03-26
ch 1,
abuseI think this is quite good! It reads well, and it's a nice idea. There is not near enough detail, though, I think you should expand it. Where you do write details you do it very well, but you don't do it often enough. Good work, though!


Love,
~Dia
A. M. Nelson
2008-03-23
ch 1,
abuseThis is only the first chapter, I hope that I can get positive feedback for this story because I have big plans for this. Please, take a moment and comment if you like it, or even if you don't.
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