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| Alycia Beverly 2008-04-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMG girl this so good...it's rele intersting I cant wait until u finish so I can read the whole thing |
| marinawings 2008-03-31 ch 2, | abusegreat chapter! braxton is an intriguing character. and he sounds attractive! the universe you've created here is very believable. i like the the little details. keep up the good work! |
| marinawings 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abusethis story is very good so far. i am already loving the plot. make sure to look out for grammar/spelling errors. those tend to creep in on even the best of us. the story started off a bit quickly, but to me, that's far better than starting off too slowly. and i already like your characters. elena and her dad are very realistic, and of course, what girl doesn't like reading about a good-looking guy crash landing in her yard from outer space? keep up the good work! this is most certainly going in my C2. |
| DiaRose 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseI think this is quite good! It reads well, and it's a nice idea. There is not near enough detail, though, I think you should expand it. Where you do write details you do it very well, but you don't do it often enough. Good work, though! Love, ~Dia |
| A. M. Nelson 2008-03-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is only the first chapter, I hope that I can get positive feedback for this story because I have big plans for this. Please, take a moment and comment if you like it, or even if you don't. |