   ghurl00 2009-11-12 . chapter 1Cute.:D |
 nutbuster 2009-06-27 . chapter 1Oh my goodness, it's so cute! D: The perfect length too. |
 Vintar 2009-04-08 . chapter 1Wow, I died. That was an amazing ride XD
Great! :D |
 toffeecakesxox. 2008-12-28 . chapter 1Cutest line EVAH!
“Did you just tell me you love me?” He asked.
“No, I told your chest that I love you.”
VERY SWEET oneshot! :D Very squeal-worthy!
-toffeecakesxox. |
 big.break.and.laryngitis 2008-11-16 . chapter 1aw. i like it. very cute. |
 Pinkamoo 2008-10-30 . chapter 1Short, but sweet. Nice one!
I'd be totally embarrassed too. And probably even more stubborn! |
 Lily Llynn 2008-10-26 . chapter 1Too short for my taste, but this was very cute.
Two things I saw:
"I opened and cloes my mouth..." (Close misspelled and should be closed.)
"as though he were going to kiss me..." (should be he was.)
Other than that, this was fine (though again, I don't really like too-short oneshots in general). I'm very glad xoxluurve added this to our c2. (: |
 camelia sinensis 2008-10-26 . chapter 1 sweet. ;) |
 katie valentine 2008-10-26 . chapter 1ahh for a moment there i thought the guy wont say ily, lol. i like this. short, simple and sweet! |
 Alenor 2008-03-26 . chapter 1aw, so cute! |
 LiME-GREEN-CAPES 2008-03-24 . chapter 1aw! cute! |
 TwinkleHeart 2008-03-24 . chapter 1aw kute |
 SparklingStar25 2008-03-24 . chapter 1cute! |
 wandless 2008-03-23 . chapter 1Aw. It would've been cuter if she'd actually been talking to his chest, but he misunderstood. Heh heh! That was nice and short, fun to read. |
 BeingMyself 2008-03-23 . chapter 1Aha, I just loved the "No, I told your chest" line! |
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