|Reviews for Not a Fully Processed thought|
| Neverland.dream 8/2/12 . chapter 1
Aww。 it was not much of a story but i loved every bit of it! :)
| nicaaaaa 6/1/11 . chapter 1
So sweet :') I'll be practically shy too if I'd say the 3 words, 8 syllable, I love you :)
| not one for sanity 1/15/11 . chapter 1
OW! that's so cute! adorable :D
| Brolinshipper 7/28/10 . chapter 1
Aw, love it!
| Ngoc1231 7/22/10 . chapter 1
I should have reviewed this. I was trying to read this off my PS3 but I couldn't find it.
I love this a lot. And I too would have freaked out like her. It is nice to read that it was a happy ending. And I usually stay away from stories this short (under 1k) but I am happy I made this exception :D
Love the story!
| Just-Another-Broken-Heart 5/6/10 . chapter 1
I'm Cami and I've read this about a billion times and I may've reviewed on my old account, I don't remember. But anyway, I love this scene and I wanna kinda ask you a bit of a favor. I'm starting a new story and there's a moment where this scene would fit in perfectly and I was wondering if I could maybe use it. I get it if you say no because i understand hat this is something you worked hard on and it's like me asking you to let me borow your child but I would give you full credit for everything and make sure people knew where I got it from.
I would love to be able to give you a sample of the story but unfortunately my laptop gave me the blue screen of death yesterday and I lost all seventeen chapters i've finished so far and I've been too busy mourning the loss of my beloved computer and everything on it to get started recreating all of it. If you're interested in letting me use the scene I would only be able to tell you the gist of the story and describe the moment where I want to put it.
Please lemme know.
| Icyfire4w5 12/1/09 . chapter 1
"I love you" might sound really simple, yet sometimes, people are too shy to confess their love for each other.
| ghurl00 11/12/09 . chapter 1
| nutbuster 6/27/09 . chapter 1
Oh my goodness, it's so cute! D: The perfect length too.
| Koyoushi 4/8/09 . chapter 1
Wow, I died. That was an amazing ride XD
| toffeecakesxox 12/28/08 . chapter 1
Cutest line EVAH!
“Did you just tell me you love me?” He asked.
“No, I told your chest that I love you.”
VERY SWEET oneshot! :D Very squeal-worthy!
| big.break.and.laryngitis 11/16/08 . chapter 1
aw. i like it. very cute.
| Pinkamoo 10/30/08 . chapter 1
Short, but sweet. Nice one!
I'd be totally embarrassed too. And probably even more stubborn!
| Lily Llynn 10/26/08 . chapter 1
Too short for my taste, but this was very cute.
Two things I saw:
"I opened and cloes my mouth..." (Close misspelled and should be closed.)
"as though he were going to kiss me..." (should be he was.)
Other than that, this was fine (though again, I don't really like too-short oneshots in general). I'm very glad xoxluurve added this to our c2. (:
| camelia sinensis 10/26/08 . chapter 1