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| robertrehcra 2008-03-23 ch 1,  | abuseChange pick pocket to mug or mugged I liked it. It is a good introduction for Kith. I am assuming that you plan on adding the twist with the new passengers. Because you do need a twist. It could also use a little bit of a tech update. A badge but no form of communicating device? I am not exactly sure what level of tech you are going for but if its just suppose to be an introduction I think you really don't need to add anything. |