wow, very systematical.

I just kinda wish there was more than just dialouge, because if so it would throw the story through to the next level.

very nice concept and idea!

I am really enjoying your writing and subject material. I also like how you add in humor to your stories. The real thing that I like about them as how they feel so real, like if people are actually going through this crap everyday, which I'm sure they are. You are quickly becoming one of my favorite writers and I look forward to reading more.

Found one spelling error, if you care.
"You get on with them?”
Think you meant get along here

Okay, so angst and suicide are the norm, while being pragmatic is considered unhealthy. Interesting doctor!