I like this poem, but I think you must have had some formatting issues (usually fictionpress messes up the stanzas, etc.) Other than that, I tried just to look at the poem and its message, and I think that your poem realtes to a lot pf people who may feel shadowed. Keep writing!

Aww this is so sad! I can so relate though. Love the poem.. hope you feel better ^_^


XKristie MarieX

sounds like a song, it could be a song, the idea is interesting.