Scary!

Wow, very creepy once again. But it is always creepy when little dead kids go postal. Nice job!

Awesome!
I really enjoy your stories (:
Kids are among the scariest things there can be.

Oh my God. That was so freakin' sad. The whole time in the beginning I was tring not to cry :(.

What I don't get is how Margot killed her. I mean, I read it over and she really couldn't.

I'M SO CONFUSED! all in all VERY WELL WRITEN!

I loved this. The ending was perfect! You had wonderful descriptions of Adie; it made her seem so real.

Good job!

I do want to know what Margot was doing back at home. There's no reason for that, it is just a nice thing to know. Other than that, I like the story, even more than that, I like the style you used in this one.

EW! Hopefully I will be able to sleep tonight...that was so grimm...so fantastically grimm. hehe. I loved your gory descriptions of Adie. It's also very creative that you chose a name that had meaning to it. I think you should make a whole novel out of this. It would be absolutely sickly amazing if you did. Then you can scare the crap out of me again! haha. Well done at executing a horror story that will stick with me for years to come!

What a great creepy story! I really like it:)

good job, I liked it. Creeped me out haha.
Faith

That was terrifying, in a really good way. And I was stupid enough to read it at midnight. >.<

I loved it, though. You're really good with descriptions. I could imagine it all as clearly as if I was watching it unfold before me. And the ending! I did not see it coming, but it makes perfect sense after reading it, and it definitely makes the whole thing more creepy and chilling.

I'll have to see if you've written anything else, later when it's not the middle of the night. xD

~RM

Awesome story, it was really creepy! I feel sorry for both Sissy and Adie. I wasn't expecting the ending, it was really good. Your an awersome writer! ^_^

Again, creepy!

I noticed a few typos here and there ('I cold hear' should be 'could'), but if you go over this again you'll be able to find them. =P

So it was really Sissy's fault that she died, even if a small part? Did she delay too long, or does the creepy undead Adie just want an excuse to hold a grudge against her?

Like I said, scary! Nicely done.

That was really good, dark but good. I liked your descriptions of the dead girl. overall it was really well written.