So sorry about your friend. I like Into the night best, it's really emotional and it just seems really honest. They're all great though :)

I like all of them, though my favorite is Untitled. I think it could go pretty far in a contest, but I wasn't really sure on the rhythm of the poem because it lacked punctuation, except for one comma. I just think more would help it flow.

Honestly, I think you should enter "Untitled" into the poetry contest. I'm sorry that you lost your friend too and I choose Untitled because it's a common misconception you have to rhyme for something to be poetry and in MY opinion (it might not be the same as anyone else's), it's more emotional. It's something that you sit down and think about after you've finished reading. You're welcome for the review and good luck in the contest!

oh they are all good. yeah u really are the poetry queen. though since i have to chose it would be between into the night and the untitled one. but i guess i may have to narrow it down further um...wah i can't decide! um...um...Into the Night because that seems more deep with the emotion. okay i'm done so u can read.

i'm sorry for the loss of your friend. This poem as a very good rhyme scheme but I don't know if I'd enter it in a contest. They tend not to go for emotional topics like this. but it does have very good rhyme.