Great story so far! Keep it up! :D

Hopefully you'll end up deciding not to delete this. It's a very good piece - short but really well-written. I just felt the pain and the anger of the speaker here; the words were so convincing to the point where I thought he was talking directly at me...blaiming me somehow for the suffering that he felt. I loved the last line, too. It conveyed a sense of hope for the speaker's fate - that he'll be able to move on.