I don't think the word beautiful describes this well enough! By far my favorite of the poems I've read of your's today! You are amazing and this poem is genius!
Just...wow...I'm blown away!
~your new major fan, Rin~

This poem was powerful and nice.I loved the way you used each stanza to say what you are and make it more strong with the lines afterwards.

But what I dislike was that some of the lines are confusing and I didn't get them. eg.But my name will be a tower.

The comparison was nice.I liked the lilies stanza the best. :)

I like how you're saying that you feel like you've experienced a lot, but you know that there's more to come. My favorite stanza was the fourth to last one; it has so much amazing imagery and your way with words is flawless. I think you should focus your poem in on the best stanzas because it seemed a little bit lost in the beginning. There was too much description preceding the meat of the poem.

oh, I especially love the last three lines. And how it remembered the beginning. Too cool.

Peace & Love

westnedge ~> park

Amazing poem you got here. Very deep, but it never gets ridiculously deep which is the case with many poems on here. Nice work!

~Thomicas