Reviews for My Hated Betrothed

Spotluver26 2008-04-29 ch 6,	abuseHey, amazing chapter. I'm glasd they finally met like as finaces(sp). Write more soon, thanks spirit
Spotluver26 2008-04-24 ch 5,	abuseHey, I think I know why Seth hates her! :) Write more soon thanks spirit
Qwerty007 2008-04-19 ch 1,	abuseOh! I'm sorry I've always just assumed it was the same everywhere. My fault for assuming. Totally up to you then!
Qwerty007 2008-04-19 ch 3,	abuseAlso, your commas are all over the place. If it helps try saying your sentences out loud, pausing at each comma. You'll see what I'm talking about.
Qwerty007 2008-04-19 ch 2,	abusePunctuation goes inside the quotation marks, like this: "Hi, Mom," she said. And you don't do: "Hi, Mom!", she cried. That's really important, like grammar 101. Please remember!
Spotluver26 2008-04-14 ch 4,	abuseHey, great chapter. Write more soon. thanks spirit
Spotluver26 2008-04-05 ch 3,	abuseGReat chapter , write more soon and it wasnt to short thanks spirit
Spotluver26 2008-03-25 ch 2,	abuseHEY, great story so far. Write more soon thanks spirit
misery sister 2008-03-25 ch 1,	abuseGreat story so far! Keep it up! :D
lilazndork 2008-03-24 ch 1,	abusenice prologue! u better updated soon! ill be waiting!