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Le Cosmonaute 3/30/08 . chapter 1
Beautiful, especially the 4th stanza. And nice finish, too.
AwesomeIncarnate 3/25/08 . chapter 1
Wow. Very good. I really liked this. The repitition fits in nicely. Two thumbs up.