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| simpleplan13 2008-03-24 ch 1,  | abuseI love the second to last stanza. That image was really powerful. The only thing I might say is some punctuation might help especially in the first and second stanzas, but still it's a really great piece. |
| generically beautiful 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseWell, I already told you what I thought about this poem, but reviews are happy, so I'm leaving you one anyway! -Christine |
| drummerbonbon 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. |