oh wow, i like that saying! Lol, kind of a negative quote, but i guess those make for the best ones, great piece for some reason i just liked this one, maybe just the way the words flow

ha, i can clearly see your mocking of mr. d.'s class. at least some of that useless info is being used in a creative way.

ok, wow.

i just realized that i got your message right at the exact second i typed 'help me God' into google because the websites i was looking at were only frustrating me.

i just looked up and saw it right as i was on this one website.

ok, that is wow.

I like the bolding, but not that burn is part of burning in the beginning that just seemed a bit off. I also think that first stanza needs some more punctuation. I did love the parts in parenthesis and the reference to that phrase. Nice job.

You don't always burn when you crash.

*Oogly fingers*

-Wally