Reviews for crash and burn - FictionPress.com

helixdown 2008-07-05 ch 1,	abuseoh wow, i like that saying! Lol, kind of a negative quote, but i guess those make for the best ones, great piece for some reason i just liked this one, maybe just the way the words flow
shadows of a trackless sea 2008-05-04 ch 1,	abuseha, i can clearly see your mocking of mr. d.'s class. at least some of that useless info is being used in a creative way.
alison 2008-03-25 ch 1, anon.	abuseok, wow. i just realized that i got your message right at the exact second i typed 'help me God' into google because the websites i was looking at were only frustrating me. i just looked up and saw it right as i was on this one website. ok, that is wow.
simpleplan13 2008-03-24 ch 1,	abuseI like the bolding, but not that burn is part of burning in the beginning that just seemed a bit off. I also think that first stanza needs some more punctuation. I did love the parts in parenthesis and the reference to that phrase. Nice job.
Walrus Lover 2.0 2008-03-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseYou don't always burn when you crash. Oogly fingers -Wally