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helixdown
2008-07-05
ch 1,
abuseoh wow, i like that saying! Lol, kind of a negative quote, but i guess those make for the best ones, great piece for some reason i just liked this one, maybe just the way the words flow
shadows of a trackless sea
2008-05-04
ch 1,
abuseha, i can clearly see your mocking of mr. d.'s class. at least some of that useless info is being used in a creative way.
alison
2008-03-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseok, wow.

i just realized that i got your message right at the exact second i typed 'help me God' into google because the websites i was looking at were only frustrating me.

i just looked up and saw it right as i was on this one website.

ok, that is wow.
simpleplan13
2008-03-24
ch 1,
abuseI like the bolding, but not that burn is part of burning in the beginning that just seemed a bit off. I also think that first stanza needs some more punctuation. I did love the parts in parenthesis and the reference to that phrase. Nice job.
Walrus Lover 2.0
2008-03-24
ch 1, anon.
abuseYou don't always burn when you crash.

*Oogly fingers*

-Wally
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