 Swiftstriker 2008-05-16 . chapter 4This was good. I was guessing at reincarnation and you pulled it off very well. I'll be interested to see how this story really unfolds but you've already surprised me at how well it's written. Keep it up. |
 PhantomsInMyEyes 2008-05-16 . chapter 4Very nice chapter! The lost love concept between Katie and David was very sweet. ^.^ |
 PhantomsInMyEyes 2008-05-02 . chapter 3Very good chapter! It was very interesting. The characters are really realistic, and I actually find Katie genuinely likable.
You had a couple verb tense problems like here: "Actually, Katie feared getting close to people in case they end up hurting her, which is why she pushes them away with embarrassing comments and awkward moments" This should have been: "Actually, Katie feared getting close to people in case they ended up hurting her, which is why she pushed them away with embarrassing comments and awkward moments" There was once when you wrote "japanese". You might want to change that.
Update soon please! I really want to find out what happens! |
 AmoriTakahashi 2008-05-02 . chapter 1damnit |
 PhantomsInMyEyes 2008-04-16 . chapter 2Goodness me, Andrew sounds sexy! Mreow! Those are the ones that you have to worry about though... |
 PhantomsInMyEyes 2008-04-16 . chapter 1Hey, this is HugsLee13 from DA. I just dropped by the read your story.
I like it. Normally that kind of brief overview would annoy me to no end, but I rather like how you did it. I must go read the next chapter! |
 Swiftstriker 2008-03-27 . chapter 2Honestly, I have no idea where you're going with this right now, but I'm very intersted. |
 Swiftstriker 2008-03-25 . chapter 1You now have my attention. I hope you update soon as this promises to be one of the better stories I've read. |