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Reviews For: Coffee For The First Time

Astrum Viscus
2008-03-24
ch 1,
abuse"He stood up, covered from head to toe in poopy, and angrily stomped out of the store."
As well written and amusing as I found the whole work to be, I must admit I nearly died of laughter at this line.
ShadowFane
2008-03-24
ch 1,
abuseCOOL! Lol. :) I loved this. Great job!

SF
Good Ol' Magic
2008-03-24
ch 1,
abuseI was wondering the same as Lucifer. What IS a Grande Caramel Machiatto? Great work.Witty language!
josh-u-rawr
2008-03-24
ch 1,
abuseHahah i loved this. it seemed so real. i could actually see them sitting there! thankyou for making me laugh! write a sequel of their next coffe date, lol! very clever work. kudo to you *favourites*
J.W. Hargrove-MystMan
2008-03-24
ch 1,
abuseHa ha, great story. Hilarious. That's really all I can say. I like your use of "**" "poopy" and "dooky" though.
Albie
2008-03-24
ch 1,
abuseHaha Genius!
Theres no other word really :P
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