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| Astrum Viscus 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuse"He stood up, covered from head to toe in poopy, and angrily stomped out of the store." As well written and amusing as I found the whole work to be, I must admit I nearly died of laughter at this line. |
| ShadowFane 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseCOOL! Lol. :) I loved this. Great job! SF |
| Good Ol' Magic 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseI was wondering the same as Lucifer. What IS a Grande Caramel Machiatto? Great work.Witty language! |
| josh-u-rawr 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseHahah i loved this. it seemed so real. i could actually see them sitting there! thankyou for making me laugh! write a sequel of their next coffe date, lol! very clever work. kudo to you *favourites* |
| J.W. Hargrove-MystMan 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseHa ha, great story. Hilarious. That's really all I can say. I like your use of "**" "poopy" and "dooky" though. |
| Albie 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseHaha Genius! Theres no other word really :P |