hehe its very diff to wot im use to reading but i still luv it =)

really well worded... like u know how some ppl right stuff like this and the things they say... kinda just gross u out =P

u didnt do that =)

luv u x x x

"The innocence we play is justified."

-yum.

Nice poem for lustfulness. I hope your frustration was satisfied..

This flows really well.

It seems like it's going to be tastelessly dirty and completely unsatisfying, but parts of it suprised me. It's intelligent lust :]

I think we've all been there once or twice. Lol. You worded it fantastically, though. I loved this. Actually...I'm adding this to my favs. :)

SF