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| Eve's Deception 2008-05-18 ch 1,  | abuseclicking my tongue, and you know what comes next i wont say the line, both because a.) i am a coward & b.) despite everything- he is still yours. im coming to terms with feeling (felt-ing?) something similar. |
| painting andromeda 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuse'He is the epitome of fever and you are burning up.' Something about that line really stuck out, I saw it almost as a sore truth. Good job, I like the lapse of time, it was represented beautifully. Stephen |