Reviews for The Golden Child - FictionPress.com

Diamond Ouk 2008-04-11 ch 1,	abuseThis is god :D It's really graphic lol.
perpetual questions 2008-04-10 ch 1,	abuseAn overly-positive, sickeningly cheerful person? At least that's what I thought of. The specific vocabulary works to be inriguing and evocative. Interesting piece.
Arn 2008-04-08 ch 1,	abuseI like that concept. "Strangle you with rainbows." has a certain dark meaning to it, i think. I like how you compared her to both 'honey' and 'cancer' at the same time. I guess exposing both sides of the coin.
Billie.Joelle 2008-04-06 ch 1,	abuseI really like this. You have some really good imagery, that really gives you the picture of that too-sweet someone. Nice work. ~BJ
Stranger in the Night 2008-03-31 ch 1,	abuseThis poem reminds me of that one person that is just TOO nice. Sickly sweet, I'd say. Very well done :)
kloun doll 2008-03-25 ch 1,	abusethere's something "sweet" in this "darkness" something magical.
Tranquil Thorns 2008-03-24 ch 1,	abuseInteresting, though creepy. =P It reminds me a little of one of those creepy horror-movie children. Anyway, I like your vocabulary here, especially in 'Tonguing your meat' and 'gnawed your hate away'. Such words give the poem an eerie, parasitical feel. I'm not sure I caught the symbolism, though, if you intended any? Either way, good work!