OH MY GOODNESS. It's been quite awhile hasn't it. And it's great to see you posting lots of poems! :) I really like this piece. Well written. :) Keep writing and always be positive.
Really interesting and powerful imagery... I like it a lot. The title is really great as well. The only thing is the last stanza seemed like it could use some commas, but other than that it was really wonderful
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