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Reviews For: The Seraph Dragon Chronicles
Sarthim 2008-07-11 . chapter 1
Kudos to you for providing an information sheet on the world that you are sculpting. There are many fantasy stories on the web that take place in magical realms, but they don't explain the races and geography until later (not that there is anything wrong with those who do it, it just gets confusing sometimes).
DigitalScripter 2008-04-27 . chapter 2
For the prologue I would go back and polish it up a bit. I noticed a few sentences written in past tense when they should have been in the present. Though I'm no pro so maybe it's just me. Anyways good work again you have crafted an interesting realm.
DigitalScripter 2008-04-27 . chapter 1
I like the backstory, it made me somewhat interested in the story itself. I don't know if I would have started with it back you have interested me enough to continue so good work.
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