This was so good...beautiful imagery and word choice. Really an amazing piece. Funny, because I was listening to Panic when i was reading this. I feel all nostalgic now. Fantabulous piece. :)

Oh, this was one of my favourites! I especially liked the part about giving the skeleton a piano, and all of the imagery was perfect, as per usual. The whole thing was beautiful, haunting and had the blissful thoughts of madness, or so it seemed at times, and I loved the line "If you want, we can skip down to hell together".
This is an extraordinary piece, each stanza had something that only you could dream up, and something that everyone in this world can read and say "Wow, she's right."
Excellent job, as always!
Danielle=)

I don't know why, but I loved this. Something familiar in the metaphors and word pictures you used, but so not your usual stuff. I don't know, but it was lovely. So many odd ends sticking out of one poem to make a kaliedascope of sweet and color and dreams underneath my tongue. Simply lovely. Great job! So glad you're back!

I love the surreal yet comprehensible imagery. The only thing I didn't like was "drumming on a drum", like your first reviewer said. Otherwise, amazing as always. And I love the lines you put in the summary.

Bluebells and violet,
caked in snow – this a nice imagery.

to me this sounds like a funny song, I mean the rhyme is pretty good.

I really like this poem because each stanza portrays something that someone may encounter in real life.

I didn't really like the phrase, "drumming on a drum" it sounds a little redundant. perhaps, try "beating on a drum"?

Another thing I liked was the word choice behind this, especially at the part where it read "So give the skeleton a piano/just so we can dance to his sorrowful tunes."

I was a little confused at the last line, why is "(me?)" there? Does it meant that both you and her fall in love?

I enjoyed this poem very much. *adds to faves* =)