Reviews for panic says things could get odd

Ashelin 2008-03-31 ch 1,	abuseI don't know why, but I loved this. Something familiar in the metaphors and word pictures you used, but so not your usual stuff. I don't know, but it was lovely. So many odd ends sticking out of one poem to make a kaliedascope of sweet and color and dreams underneath my tongue. Simply lovely. Great job! So glad you're back!
perpetual questions 2008-03-29 ch 1,	abuseI love the surreal yet comprehensible imagery. The only thing I didn't like was "drumming on a drum", like your first reviewer said. Otherwise, amazing as always. And I love the lines you put in the summary.
kloun doll 2008-03-28 ch 1,	abuseBluebells and violet, caked in snow – this a nice imagery. to me this sounds like a funny song, I mean the rhyme is pretty good.
Silv3rDr34mS 2008-03-27 ch 1,	abuseI really like this poem because each stanza portrays something that someone may encounter in real life. I didn't really like the phrase, "drumming on a drum" it sounds a little redundant. perhaps, try "beating on a drum"? Another thing I liked was the word choice behind this, especially at the part where it read "So give the skeleton a piano/just so we can dance to his sorrowful tunes." I was a little confused at the last line, why is "(me?)" there? Does it meant that both you and her fall in love? I enjoyed this poem very much. adds to faves =)