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Reviews For: All That Is Dark

demonsdisciple
2008-04-09
ch 1,
abuseLovely. Love the idea of personifying a streetlight. An original idea and an original poem.
Professional Dreamer
2008-03-25
ch 1,
abuseWhat I like best? The idea of signs on a streetlamp starting to itch. And it going blind. Those are fantastic personifications.
Falcon/CC/ Cha-Kid
2008-03-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseGAH! I lurve this one and when I feel like logging in I will put it on favorites!
One thing: "it's" is "it is" so you need to change it to "its" in the line "float in *its* honey-colored pool of radiance."
M favorite line is "but they are starting to itch."

Falcon
Amethyst Leirda PhotoMaster
2008-03-24
ch 1,
abuseAw :( It's so sad! I like the combination of free form poetry and story format. It seems different from other more recent works I've read but still follows your general voice.

I like it.
In the Rye
2008-03-24
ch 1,
abuseHmnn. I liked the idea. I'm not sure you completely got the style you were going for, though. But it was decent.
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