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| Moondog Dozier 2008-03-25 ch 1,  | abuseI like the interplay of music and specific individual details. It provides a tone for the narrative visual when you weave "stp", into the mix. Inventive. MD:77. |
| Arcane D. 2008-03-25 ch 1, | abusearcane. that's what i'd describe this piece as. one thing's for sure though: this isn't really your everyday generic poem you'd find on fictionpress. I need to start taking it for what it is at times and just realize that it's about hair and how you're discontent(?) with it. thanks for the read. arcane |