ohgosh. that is creepy and so sad.

nice job.

yours until the wind changes,

gg

O wow. Creepy but so good. Keep up the good poetry.

eerie- definitely eerie is the word i would use to describe this one. aHA! this is why you were asking if fire has one or two syllables! got it...

i like this very much... you are on a streak girl, keep it up!