i really like this chapter juels is finally gettin a bit bitchy and out there and ready to fight if she as to
and i loved the part where aj is all protective of her and they r in the room over all i love it cant wait for the next chapter :D

I love this chapter and glad that it was long too. Glad to see that Judi is getting a back bone and AJ is soo sweet to her but I want to know why there are so many people in his house including peeps form the other gang and why do all these girls know all his business did he sleep around with all of them, gees and that Kaia girl deserved that slap now she just needs one from Judi so she can shut the hell up she's just as bad a Bridget Man I cant wait for Judi's past to com to fruition Please update soon.. please more of Judi and AJ moments. :)

That chapter was amazing ! I love how AJ's character is developing ! You have to be one of the best writers on FP :)
Update soon :)
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Great chapter. How Judith kept her cool (at least a bit) in that situation I don't know. I would've run away. Into hiding. These people are so scary. And making little girls dance dirty for laughs and money? Disgusting.

Can't wait to read more. I love this story.

How can i say how much i loved this chapter. The length..., judi and Aj... , New people from judi's past..., Old memories coming back..., Missy...,Vince...Man when you bring a chapter together you don't hold back.

First i loved how Judi just doesn't hold back when she speaks her mind. That is a quality that i am in love with about her. She doesn't think that she has back bone at times (nor does other people) but when Judi fires a rant she doesn't hold back. I loved how Missy tried to explain to her that she should choose her words better, but i love spite fire judi that yells them what she feels (even through she doesn't mean to at times.)

Sean scene was great, i like when the people around her are surprised at who she knows. Even Aj telling her to erase his number and Judi telling him "No"...Classic. then they play fight and make up...awsome. but It is things like this that make me scared at what his reasons for blackmailing her for so long. I am walking on egg shell for when that is revealed.

Are you going to completely reveal her past and let her remember everything before she was adopted? with all the small memories i think i really need her to remember even though you can tell it will not be pretty...but it is these things that make her special. Truly one of the Best characters that i have read.

AJ is far too cute!

This is a great story with very dynamic characters, good job! I love that it has a cohesive story line with drama but without seeming overly dramatic or drawn out. The pacing is just right.
I'm intrigued but the Sean Crawford character, maybe I'm wrong but he seems like a good guy...deep down anyway, and definitely adds interest.
This story is progressing so well and I just thought I'd let you know this is the first story I've reviewed (and I've been reading for a long time) as it's one of the best I've read.
Keep it up :)

thanks for the new chapter! I love your story! Nice also to learn more about her past:)

I think the part where it went to a lil bit from her past made me think of a child called it. That book was really sad and it makes me think that some bad shit happened to her to. I really like this story and I always get so happy when i check my email and there is a new chapter. I hope you write a lot more a lot faster because with a story this good i get a little impatient lol sorry. Keep up the good work though

this chapter was really funny , i mean that judith and even missy were.And did you Vince broke AJ and Judith moments aar!!PLEASE FOR THE NEXT UPDATE DONT'T MAKE US WAIT TOO LONG. I LOVE YOUR STORIE

Another great chapter...loved the introduction of Sean and the interaction between AJ and Judith! Can't wait for your next update and hope it's soon!

good chapter , i loved the kindergarten line XD it was a little bit confusing though , but i skimmed through most of it so thats probly my fault :P
update soon!

Ok so I decided to review now since I'm actually physically in love with your story :) I've been a silent reader for quite some time now, but this chapter was so freaking amazing I had to review it :D

I can see a more confident Judy now, I like it! There's so much drama and hate but she's still so optimistic. I'm really interested in her past as there seems like huge chunks missing from whast given, all i can pick up from through small quotes is that her uncle(?) sexually abused her, or harrassed her. But I really love her character! She's the sweet polite girl, but will stand up for herself and her loved ones! The silent but violent type :D

Moving on to AJ, I love his character! He's mysterious, hot and one loving boyfriend, although he does tend to get jealous a lot but hey, he's hot I'll let him off haha! Ok it seems i have an obsession with AJ, damn if he existed in real life I would actually freak LOL! His humour and seriousness (is that a word?) blend well together, he can be funny one second and serious the next, its freaking hot. Ok I shall stop on AJ because you'll probably get me saying AJ's hot millions of times.

Missy & Vince should get together because their just too cute! Although I'm not sure whether i should love or hate claire at the moment.
AJ's sisters; I don't like them. Only like Silva and Marina.
Sean; New character but he sounds hot too, and damned mysterious. I wonder who he's killed and why AJ hates him so much.
Pretties; I hope they don't turn up in the story ever again, as I hate them with a passion! Especially Bridget! Actually, if they are mentioned, I hope it's because Judy beat the crap out of them :D
Panthers; Love hate relationship with them. I like half of them and hate the other half. Kaia can go die too !

Post soon!

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Yay Vince is back !
The play wrestling was brilliant by the way.
Great chapter ;)

wow! This chapter was definitely getting intense! We got to see some of judi's past and it makes me sick but also curious. Gosh, I love missy. Altho she's violent, she seems like a really good friend. And all those girls at the house definitely get on my nerves. They are rude and so nosey!