Reviews for It Was Only a Kiss

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Bloodfeeder94 2008-07-05 ch 1,	abuseOh... sounds great so far!! :)
aneesa-93 2008-06-23 ch 5,	abuseHey!! that took ages! i was checking almost everyday for an update - you don't know how crazy i am about your writing and your characters. sorry about not reviewing earlier, i wanted to leave a good review and didn't have enough time to write a proper one before. i really like how you can see so much about Juels character through just little things - such as when she was thinking that she should have waved at AJ's friends so that they didn't think that she was snobbish or whatever. AJ. I mean, when he was bossing Juels around on this end bit- GAH!! i hate it when guys act like that, all cocky and indifferent. i would get really angry if some guy was talking to me like that - however, it is really funny to see Juels getting so wound up about it. And you know, the way you've described AJ totally reminds me of the guy who sits next to me in Eng Lit. I'm serious. Those two just kind of merge into the same person. Except my AJ mostly has this small smirk on his face. But yeh.. i won't bore you too much about that. Have you any idea when the next update's going to be? Also, could i ask you something that's been bugging me since chapter 4 - What is TAP class? What does it stand for? I live in England and i've never heard about it before aneesa xx
Shontara 2008-06-23 ch 5,	abuseI loved how you mentioned the girls were acting like little boys. AJ was kinda mean-ish. His friends seem entertaining, but she is so paranoid. She is definitly not one of my favorite characters, but she works for your story. She's very convincing though, if she were a real person I'm not sure I'd like her much then either. But your writing makes her seem real.
criti-sized 2008-06-23 ch 5,	abuseMan, I'm so damn mad. I had written you a nice, long review before, and somehow it didn't go through... Can you imagine how frustrating that is? If my computer wasn't already shot to **, I'd do it a favor. Anyways, The chapter overall was good, though not as long as your other ones. I felt like Judith when AJ kept beckoning her to come to him... I do that to my cat, lol. And she might as well not worry about what his friends think, they're not gonna matter in the end. 0_o C.S. I realized in my last review that I can't spell worth a damn, LMAO.
B. Penn 2008-06-22 ch 5,	abuseI'm lovin the unique characters. Three cheers for realistic, fallible heroines! There needs to be a C2 for them, yeah? It's nice to find such a well-written cliche that you forget it's a cliche altogether. Kudos!
LadyluckAJ 2008-06-21 ch 5,	abuseYou are AMAZING! although the tallest would probably reach a level of ‘Campbell’s soup mm-m goodness’ that would have girls watering at the mouth -I am still Laughing at this one...too funny. Ok when i first saw how short the chapter was a almost screamed until i saw you address it at the bottom and then after i read this chapter...i am in love with this story even more. Okay i think that AJ was a little harsh with the way he spoke to her but for some reason i like loved it when he said that he would show her how to be in a relationship with a real man...Boy has style and i love him. I really need to find out what his problem with EVan is and i hope she can really see the type of friends she has but i have a feeling she will find that out later along with the fact that Brigett knew about Trey...smh.. Did i already say that i love this story? Well I DO! :-) I am already begging for the next chapter to come soon.
criti-sized 2008-06-09 ch 4,	abuseOkay, here I go. I was tryingt to hold off until you update again, so I had something else to read, but I guess I have to wait now until you update again, lol. [I should’ve asked her why she’d agreed to it the night before, but I had still been shell shocked over the whole thing, and then add in the fact that AJ had held my hand as he escorted us to the car the fact that I had been able to function, especially with Kaia looking like she wanted to rip my ovaries out and feed them to me, was a miracle in itself.] Lol, thats probably how my brother felt when he had to pick me up from a party two years ago, lol. The only problem with hanging out with people you don't know is that if they're questioned, they'll assume yo don't want to... Oh the hard life of being a teen, lol. [I smiled guiltily but didn’t apologize.] I have to deal with that a lot from my brothe's kids. It's funny how innocent children can be along with how mean, lol. [Lisa and her mom were annoying when I was in the mood to here their opinions, right now I could barely deal with my own thoughts.] hear [“You’re white, you were born pale.”] LMAO. This sentence made me bust out laughing, and my boyfriend's looking at me like I'm high... He wouldn't get the joke though, he's white, too. [He smirked, before raising my wrist up and pressing a quick kiss to the inside of my wrist in front of everyone.] Last guy that did something like that to me got punched also, that's probably why I was boyfriend-less and dateless for my prom... I didn't go anyway, lol. Well, I think tis is one of your chapters with the most interaction in it, besides the pevious one. And it had me practically laughing throughout the enture thing. C.S.
criti-sized 2008-05-25 ch 3,	abuseOh, drinking at a party is inevitable, getting drunk is an option. That's something stupid my older brother says. But anyway on to the chapter. Interesting bits in it. It's funny and messed up that Judith got smashed at the party, especially a house party... Those things make me weary, and they have their justifiable reasons. AJ and Judith, hm... I wonder how that's going to go. Being that he comes off as the nice guy that has jerkish tendencies ana can be nothing other than a guy, I'm wondering how long it's going to be before they get into a fall out. And the 'Pretty Woman' mentionwas funny. I think I only saw that movie because my brother was watching it, lol. Awesome chapter. C.S.
criti-sized 2008-05-19 ch 2,	abuseHey!! I'm back... Lol, expect to hear tat from me almost every time I review. ^_^ [And I know that’s not a word you’d normally use to describe an eye but that was the only way to describe it.] How about the make-up that makes your eye look like you got socked hard as hell? Lol. [“I think the fact that you’re going out tonight with a girl who you know nothing about besides the fact that she hates your best friend is weird but what do I know? I’m just your mother,”] I hate when parents do that. You feel like just answer the question that I asked. [“Yes well, Lisa’s mom needs to start worrying why Ms. Jared’s daughter looks the spitting image of Lisa when you know Lisa looks like her father,” I replied sweetly.] At least she put it nicely. I'm always getting told by my mother not to influence my younger sister with my great choice of words and comments. [It’s just that you don’t understand all the mean things people can say about you just on the basis that your real mother isn’t taking care of you.] Lol, imagine having nine brothers and one sister. My family can't even move into a neigborhood quietly. Too many good looking young men. Oh, boy, I hate house parties. The worst things happen at them, I know from experience. It seems like Missy and her crew are cool, but not the kind of girls that Judy should be hanging out with. She's too sweet, and they're survivalists, they'll eat her alive before she sees it coming. Awesome chapter. C.S.
LadyluckAJ 2008-05-17 ch 4,	abuseLove this chapter! Man the orders are stacked against Judith, her friends, Kaia, and now Angel. This girl just can't seem to get a break right now. I hope she is able to find out a least some of the reason why she of all people was chosen as AJ's "helper". I found it a little amusing that the whole day she was able to avoid people up until around the last period of the day...but then the day seem to get worst. :-( Poor girl...lol until the next update.
Shontara 2008-05-17 ch 4,	abuseI like this story and the bitchy characters really stay true to how bitchy girls are. I think the only thing that irks me is that Judith has barely any backbone, although she had more in this chapter while talking to bridgette. I think that is what makes her a great character because she is so real, I've met people who are like that and it just makes me want to slap some sense into them. But I was wondering when we were ever just glimpse into AJ's head, only knowing one side of the story kinda makes me wonder. But it is a great story nonetheless.
aneesa-93 2008-05-17 ch 4,	abusehey! thanx for the review reply. i wasn't sure if i was meant to answer back... once again, i loved the chapter! Judith's mum is great and i love the relationship between her and her mum. I've got a clear idea in my head of what the school is like - i can compare it to the school in my area which my brother goes to - which shows the talent of your writing. I'm really curious about why AJ needs to make it seem like he's going out with Judith - i feel sorry for her since she's very isolated but i also like the way he protected her from Bridget. There was something...missing in this chapter and i didn't realise until the end what felt wrong about it. There was no Missy! Ever since you updated the third chapter i had been wondering about Missy's response. Where was she today? I've just gotta say i really like Missy's character, she's well cool! She's interesting, and seems like a generally nice person. Any idea when the next update will be up?
UniquelyNeverSeen 2008-05-17 ch 4,	abusehey interesting story line can't wait to read more
aneesa-93 2008-05-09 ch 3,	abuseHey, sorry about the late review! I read this third chapter the very day you posted it but never got round to reviewing. It was great! Let me just say - Juels is VERY funny while drunk. The whole chapter was very interesting to read. I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter and in fact, the rest of the story. Also, you mentioned you have 3 other serious stories. Is there any chance you could post them up on fictionpress? Til the next update aneesa
Shontara 2008-05-04 ch 3,	abuseI love this new story, AJ and Judith's relationship is really interesting. AJ's whole mysterious bad ** persona is totally boss. I think that Judith is kinda wishy-washy, but you did kinda of tell us that in the beginning. I can't wait to see how this story is gonna turn out.

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