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starry eyez 2009-11-08 . chapter 21
Aw
Is it just me or is AJ patching her up and taking care of her kind of hot?
Lol sorry im just in a weird mood
Awesome chapter ;)
light.and.darkness.angel 2009-11-07 . chapter 21
Good chapter, it didn't seem very off to me, its probably because you've had some major events in your past chapters, this is the first chapter without a huge event happening, but its a good chapter. i want to learn more about judi's story/life before she was adopted! can't wait to read more!! :)
BlueAki 2009-11-05 . chapter 8
I really love this story so far. Gosh her grandmother is a racist WITCH! Ugh, I was getting so angry and feeling so embarrassed for her.
HelgaBertoni 2009-11-04 . chapter 21
Love it so far!Update soon!
dawn's unforgiving darkness 2009-11-01 . chapter 21
so cute
light.and.darkness.angel 2009-11-01 . chapter 20
...this pretty much ranks on my best story ever read list next to one other story.
beautiful writing, lovee itt to deathh! please update soon!

love it! your characters are absolutley amazing, the plot is to die for, its so original! Just out of curiosity, you said you were moving back onto campus so i'm guessing your in college, are you studying anything with literature and/or creative writing? Cause this is brilliant!
Kjersti 2009-10-25 . chapter 21
The social witch is nasty. She sees the love between Judith and her parents, and *still* goes along with her (presumably) nasty plan. :(

Emily is so sweet. I could just picture her... That fall was scary, though. And poor Judith, always getting bashed one way or another...

Can't wait to read more. This chapter was great. Didn't see anything wrong - but then I'm a bit amored with your writing, maybe my editor glasses aren't properly on. ;)
Jaynie 2009-10-25 . chapter 21
I read this story all in one shot and it's absolutely amazing! Every aspect of it is fantastic I love the characters and the storyline. It's great how you build up to things and don't just dump everything on us at once. I can't wait to see what you come up with next. I'll definitely be keeping an eye on this one. Thanks for sharing it with us.
book-geek 2009-10-25 . chapter 21
great chpter , i dont really think it was lacking anthing , ur probly just down because of all the school work :P
update soon! (:
bonghi 2009-10-24 . chapter 21
This story is so "emotional" to me as no other story on this site. I really really love it and that is why I am hanging on but please update more often, if possible. You might feel something is not right with your new chapter but your readers don't see it that way. Your writing is excellent and there is no reason for you to worry.
2madaboutbooks 2009-10-24 . chapter 21
I've just finished reading this story and i'm so in love with it! I love both AJ and Juels, they're soo cute together! :D, can't wait for the next update and hope that it's really soon!! Great job!
quotata 2009-10-24 . chapter 21
Always something new to change the dynamics!

Always keeping us hooked I suppose. Lovely chapter!

s2.eina
Trench Coats Suck 2009-10-24 . chapter 21
Loved it
adored it
all those good words
i just really liked this chapter
i wish there was more AJ time but i really like them together and how they are, how they interact and everything it's really really sweet I really wanna know why he asked her too be his fake girlfriend in the first place will we ever get too know that?
anyway update asap
Elona'Angel 2009-10-24 . chapter 21
thank you thank you i have been waitin 4ever for this 2 b updated i love this story so much the social worker is a major b*
igot4 2009-10-23 . chapter 20
Oh please oh please UPDATE SOON!
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