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windlessnight 2009-11-16 . chapter 51
hey i just wan't to say if you are publishing i will buy it even though i read it so keep up the good work !!

-thank you =)
waynesworldx3 2009-11-05 . chapter 50
dont change the ending its perfect
ShadowBrilliance 2009-10-10 . chapter 51
Loved this story! Oh, sorry, let me introduce myself, I am Kimberly Le, I love to write, my PenName is ~ShadowBrilliance~ and I'm asian! Lolrotf, I've been reading this story for about a week or two now. Love it. :) And yes, I would buy this story if it were a book published. Oh, since I reveiwed, I expect you to return the favour! Read my story and comment on it! I cannot wait for the sequel. :)

I Heart ?/ Kym
-Danariana- 2009-09-13 . chapter 51
I LOVED it! And of course I would buy a copy if I could. But I can't because I leave in Argentina xD
I cried when I thought Nate was going to die!
I'm glad you're re-editing it, because even though the story is great and has a wonderful ending I'd like to know about those deatails that were missing...like what happened between Chase and Aiden? Would they make up? Would they finally get together? And what about Rich? I'd want to know exactly what happened and see him pay for what he did to Cassie and Nate!
But I think your story is amazing and totally worth publishing! I'm so happy I could read a story like this!
Keep up the great work! :D
Shadowwolf403 2009-09-10 . chapter 51
yea you totally should and let me know so i can get the first one ;) also you don't really have to write an aftermath just blend it in the sequal. and i love the new title and the ending...literally. even the fact Nate flip out over his car i can actually see a lot of guys (most the ones i know why i have no idea) do just that. and Chase and Aiden they have to talk again if not i'm sure Cassandra will make them. lol and remember i buy the first book.
Devilish Kisses 2009-09-07 . chapter 51
Yeah, I would buy this if it were to be published! If you do get it published, can you let me know the name of the publishing company you went with? Cuz I'd like to get my stories published after they're finished
The one and only Chibs 2009-09-07 . chapter 51
DO IT I WOULD SO TOTALLY BUY THAT BOOK!
Silly-girl15 2009-09-02 . chapter 50
omg i thought they were going to pull the plug. That would have sucked. Good ending :)
Latindancer4ever 2009-09-02 . chapter 12
I was laughing so hard when Pat called Rich a "donkey's back end"! Good one! I really like this story so far. Great job!! :)
Haybell 2009-09-01 . chapter 19
i haven't had a chance to finish this story yet, but what i've read so far is really good! i can't wait to read more, but first i must get time!!
Haybell 2009-08-29 . chapter 12
i've only read up to this point, but so far i like it. can't wait to keep reading, but right now i'm going to bed lol.

Keep Writing!!
Haybell ^_^
pongoCx 2009-08-27 . chapter 50
I was totally in suspence. I sweaar! hahah
Love the ending! Its so sweet. and aw. lovely.
Nate flipping out about his car was pretty funny.
Chase and Aiden, i think they would speak agin :D
The one and only Chibs 2009-08-26 . chapter 50
OMG DONT U DARE GO BACK AND MAKE HIM DIE! DONT! THAT WOULD NOT BE FUNNY! But that was so touching! i cried! literally
Carlotta Lynn 2009-08-26 . chapter 50
FANtastic! I love the new title. I think there should be one more chapter! OMG! I thought you were going to kill him for a second and I seriously started to cry it was terrible! I'm so glad he woke up!! Nate's poor car. I would flip too!! I definitely hope Chase and Aiden speak again. I really hope to read more from you soon (and possibly one more chapter for this one). Thanks so much for this story it was awesome to follow!
Devilish Kisses 2009-08-26 . chapter 50
1. I like the new title :D
2. Since you are going to write a sequel, I think the whole Aiden and Chase thing can be solved in the sequel, and yes, they're going to speak to each other again!
3. I thought Nate's flip-out over his carwas such a guy thing to do :P
4. The ending was perfect! I'm so glad Nate didn't die! Shame on you, you made me cry during this chapter!

Anyhoo, I absolutely loved this story and I can;t wait for the sequel!
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