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| readergirl1 2008-07-25 ch 16,  | abuseGood update. I hope you get a breakthrough with your writer's block |
| readergirl1 2008-07-21 ch 15, | abuseGr...the cliffhanger was just plain mean! |
| phadils 2008-07-21 ch 15, | abuseNice update! Interesting development with Shimia... I don't think Nadia's memory erasing has been fully explained, so I'm trying to tie it into Shimia's plot to live as a shifter. Why would her father send her away? Looking forward to that mystery unfolding... I hope Alaysha recovers, poor thing. |
| pinkeclipse 2008-07-20 ch 15, | abuseyay! the action will begin just because someone didnt get their way. |
| XxPunkbrat88xX 2008-07-20 ch 15, | abuseHow MEAN! Leaving us hanging with such a cliffhanger! ;-) Great update! Can't wait to read the "family reunion"! |
| Cory D Hart 2008-07-20 ch 15, | abuseI truly enjoy this series and am happy to see your latest update! Good reading as always. |
| readergirl1 2008-07-20 ch 14, | abuseOk...now we find out some answers here. |
| Nikki 2008-07-12 ch 13, anon. | abuseGreat update! I'm so happy Nadia and Patton finally know about her past. That little girl is soo sweet, and she was just what Nadia needed to get her memory back. |
| phadils 2008-07-06 ch 13, | abuseThree chapter updates in a row! Awesome. The mating scene was quite sensuous in a tasteful way, and I'm glad that Nadia and Patton are getting ever closer. Alaysha is just adorable, with an old soul. I hope Daerek's story is next, although I can see Linus getting his own story as well. I can see Alaysha having her own story as well, eventually. I'd like to see Collette brought back into the mix, but given the shifter/human romance has already occurred, I don't know if that's the direction you want to take. No matter which direction you take, I'm sure I'll enjoy the journey! Looking forward to more updates! |
| XxPunkbrat88xX 2008-07-05 ch 13, | abuseYay! It's official! I am so glad that Ally was there to help them put some pieces of the puzzle together! Great update! I can't wait til Nadia meets Demetrius! |
| readergirl1 2008-07-05 ch 13, | abuseWhat just happened here? Alaysha's actions just confused me more. I mean I know she just unlocked Nadia's subconscious, but why did she have that reaction and faint and why is Nadia "different" now? |
| Estelin 2008-06-29 ch 1, | abusethis is great. i am just wondering where the first story is as i was going to read it over again. |
| Estelin 2008-06-29 ch 10, | abusethis was excellent. keep up the good work and writing. i can not wait to read more. |
| XxPunkbrat88xX 2008-06-29 ch 10, | abuseOh Yea! And so it begins!! The pieces of the puzzle are finally coming together! Yay! Great update! Alaysha is intriguing, I am guessing that she will aid Nadia in connecting the missing pieces? This is great and I am so glad that you share these "rough drafts" with us! |
| BettyBoo 2008-06-29 ch 10, | abuseI know Linus and Nadia will never be but damn I cant help but hope a little *blushes* Fate is indeed cruel |