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| Ygg 2008-04-01 ch 1,  | abuseI really like the title! Fits very well with the dual image as conveyed by the poem. Good work! |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abuseMan, I am really glad it's not like that here now. It was pretty snowy for awhile, but it's not anymore. Thank goodness. I like the afterthought of "Denver spring" in this. Very nice. Keep writing! :) |
| kloun doll 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseit's good the poem about the winter and spirng, there's something magic in that |