Ok so I've always been to afraid to be blunt with you but since were not longer together I can tell you straight and there are no real consiquences.
Its good writing.
as is all your writing.
But you really need to stop pretending you are anything like these charactors.
For two years I have read your storys and thought thats a cool story and then you have told me its baised on you and I find myself wondering how it is.
you are not a god or super human in any way my dear, you are not irresistable and you are not even perticularly good in a fight as far as my experience shows. and as for being a Hero... you didnt really help when I was getting beat up did you. Infact I do recal l I threw off two girls and came to your Aid.
You need to get over your megalomania because it makes you look like a fool.
I have always ignored it but now I see no reason why I should, and it seems quite a few of our friends echo these thought but think it would be mean to tell you but as far as I can see this megalomania is only going to damage you and for your own good you need to be told youre really not that great.
sorry.