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| Glowing Aura 2008-04-03 ch 1,  | abuseOh my, the black abyss of the workforce. X-( I like the rhyming scheme and the message it sends, and the symbolism of it all. I think I can relate to this piece to a point. Fantastic job. |
| simpleplan13 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abuseThe rhyming was nice and I like the idea, but the only line I didnt like was the third line... it confused me, but other than that I liked i t a lot |