 Icyfire4w5 2009-03-19 . chapter 1I admire the female in this poem, even though being raped is a very traumatic experience, she refuses to be intimidated. |
 Breaks-like-crystal 2008-05-29 . chapter 1I like the power in the poem and the defiance not to be beaten or broken. |
 Cerulean K. Harmony 2008-04-04 . chapter 1Wow. When I read this, I had a secret feeling I can't even begin to explain. Your poems have real meaning behind them, and it can be understood by everyone. I couldn't help smiling at the end. Keep writing!
~Cerulean K. Harmony~ |
 phantom66 2008-03-26 . chapter 1right on! woohoo!...sorry I'm a little hyper lol
anyways really liked this one and the title
auwsome! |
 Daiysis 2008-03-26 . chapter 1Poetic story-telling! I love it! Of course, the topic is very touching but you manage to turn it around into an event with a hopeful (I can't even think of the perfect word)... Well, anyway, it was amazing... Kep writing! lol |