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Jesse the Storyteller 2008-04-16 . chapter 1
I love poems about how a person changes. I like this a lot. It's very peaceful, as if you are finally at peace with who you are. I can relate to the feeling a lot, as well. College changes you.

I like the bit about Kanji... it's a small metaphor for life. It fits well.

I like how the entire poem is kind of a rambly run-on sentence.

Very nice. I like this. :)

-Jesse
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