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| .mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2008-03-26 ch 1,  | abuseThe beginning is good & I like how you introduce it but after that it kind of loses its meaning. There really isn't an ending; it just kind of stops somehwere, explaining nothing, leaving the reader utterly confused. |