For some reason I thought the last two lines were going to say "this artworks all I got to show/this life is all I have to know" ... I actually thought I read that and then I was like "Wait, those two lines are not the same size..." and realized you were going in a different direction. I like the line "when you're on your ON". :) Please never stop this poetry from coming from you. I adore it.

-Jesse

yeh go good vibes! i love your way of portraying them, not an easy thing to do.