aw, sweet and funny by the way, the flow of this is natural.

WOW, lots of great lines here!

"No girl can envy what does not exist."

"One so flawless, one so scarred."

"the beauty and the beautiful beast"

Even:

"She pointed her finger at his face, and laughed when he crossed his eyes trying to look at it."

Haha! I like the concept and the language is very appropriate too. Very good job! (Oh, p.s. - I always give a review when I get one, so... hint, hint _ I have a very different sort of Beauty and Beast story going, my first. So check it out if you're so inclined.)