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Michaela
2008-03-27
ch 11, anon.
abuseAsh I love this story you have to write more im looking forword to reading the rest I read all 11 chapter's but I want to read more LOL so write more k luv ya.
luv,
Mik
ash1691
2008-03-25
ch 7,
abusei thought it was good but i don't really like the whole "you" thing. You should also watch your use of quotations cause at the beginning theres a it of quotation mistakes. I don't know if you want it to be this way or not but also you forget to capitalize. But overall, good story. :D
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