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| ms. thorek 2008-07-11 ch 1, | abusei like this poem. sitting waiting patiently is one of the hardest things anyone at some point in their lives got to do. but one can't just sit and wait forever. i tried. but there comes a time when you've waited long enough and you know that you've just got to get up and save yourself from your insanity. |
| Isca 2008-06-06 ch 1, | abuseI don't think the last line fit well with the rest of the piece. However, I did love the flow and the emootion in this poem; it was beautiful! |
| Zwidon 2008-03-25 ch 1, | abuseInteresting not as good I feel as your other poems but still nice... |