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| Poetryfreak173 2008-06-30 ch 2,  | abuseThis... is intreging. I look forward to reading more of it. Keep it up. |
| Bellaria 2008-06-25 ch 2, | abuselove it, it was really good i will be watching it! |
| flyingwithdragons 2008-06-18 ch 2, anon. | abuse2 chapters in, and I'm hooked. Please keep going with this story! |
| nope 2008-06-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseah! update! |
| volleychick89 2008-05-31 ch 2, anon. | abuseReading the conclusion of a story is always exciting. The characters are finally safe from the, usually, masochistic actions of the author and they can finally get on with their life. At the same time a new story needs to be found. Thankfully I stumbled across this one and expect it to be a captivating read. I already enjoy the characters and am intrigued by the mystery shrouding Teagan's life...fun fun! lol, great chapters so far, I hope you keep with this story! |
| Jacoblover 2008-05-27 ch 2, | abusei really love this story. it's very well-written and interesting. it's so original too. i'm really excited to read what happens next. update soon please. |
| Kelly 2008-05-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou much talent person!! ^o^ Once again, exellent pacing, but I really hope the initial incident will occur in the next chapter. Or maybe I missed it? =_=... In any case, did you look into current social problems before beginning this? Because a lot of what you're talking about shadows what's really happening, only on an extreme and blatant level. Ah- but there's probably some place out there that would mirror what you're writing about exactly. On another note, I'm currently suffering severly from the lack of more chapters. Even as I type my intestines are threatening to ooze out of me. ... No presure. XD |
| Kelly 2008-05-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseFANTASTIC start!! I love how you're not trying to shove everything down our throats from the first word and on, but instead use just the right spacing and pacing to string us along. The only bad thing is if you ever lapse in updates, or didn't rap up any loose ends you have out there right now, I'd simply DIE! Literally. ... Okay, not literally, but close. Point: KEEP THE GOODS COMING! |
| k 2008-05-21 ch 2, anon. | abuseI'm really liking the character development, plot, and the setting/world that you've set so far. You've already got me hooked on 2 chapters! Keep up the good work, I can't wait to see what happens next. |
| sae 2008-05-20 ch 2, anon. | abusethese two chapters really have me hooked on your story. can't wait for the next chapter! |
| nope 2008-05-18 ch 2, anon. | abusei'm really, really intrigued and checking back often for updates, so, you know, you should, like, update :) i'm afraid i got used to you being prolific. heh. great chapters - myrika didn't lead you astray! |
| Elfear 2008-05-14 ch 2, anon. | abusehi. I think that this is a really cool story. Hope you continue posting it! |
| curator 2008-05-14 ch 2, | abuseWow. It's really otherworldly. I like it. |
| lacy-9 2008-05-12 ch 2, | abuselovely :] im really liking this story so far. i think the plot is very creative & i cant wait to read more soon! keep up the good work! |
| Nic 2008-05-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseI just read your fanfic story by this same name after I read these two chapters that you posted here, but even though I really liked that other story, this one is miles ahead in terms of-everything. Considering how good the other story is, it's surprising that this could even be better, but it is! |