Reviews for all of my vegan bleeding heart liberal crap

Hed in the Cloudz 2008-05-25 ch 1,	I love so many of these lines! They're flowing and beautiful and just fit together, and certainly thought provoking (especially the first and last ones!) My only issue is that in your second last line, you say "pain in THE belly." For some reason, this is bothering me-- whose belly (is it suffering's belly?), what belly, why the pain? If it were more vague, it would make more sense.
Tytherpol 2008-03-27 ch 1,	haha. this is kind-of amazing. :)