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| Patchye 2008-06-27 ch 3,  | abuseYou should definitely continue - I love stories like this when they're well done, which yours is (often times they aren't, so it's always great to come across one that's an execption!) |
| xbrunnettex0 2008-06-19 ch 3, | abusethis is an interesting plot. i hope u start this story again |
| WriterGurl123 2008-04-22 ch 3, | abuseIt's great. I wonder who the Emperor is, because he seems like he's not a nice guy. It seems like there's going to be a proposition made. Post More Soon! |
| ido laav 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuseAlmost as if it was real,well written.I think mia will make alot of ppl very happy in her journey,she is so angelic in her aura,her fathers judgment is clouded by his own insecurities...not happy.I wish her mother could of been a little more humble in the start,power really darkens the emotions of most,now with the stars in the sky,the wine is crisp,thanku |
| WriterGurl123 2008-03-30 ch 2, | abuseDestry is a cool name. How old is Adan and Destry? Post More Soon! |
| misfit819 2008-03-30 ch 2, | abuseI can't really say who i like or hate, but so far i just really like the story. So far the plot is flowing together and th echaracters have a stable background. I can't wait to read the rest of your story! |
| ItsCherryBomb 2008-03-30 ch 2, | abuseI love it! Mia is a cool character, having powers when she thought she didn't. To me It feels like it's real, I can picture everything happening in my head. Your a great writer *big eyes* |
| ItsCherryBomb 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseI love this story. It's so... so... there's no word for it! It's really good! |
| WriterGurl123 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseThis was a great introduction, and I was able to picture the characters in my head. Very descriptive. Post More Soon! |