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| pinkdottedlily 2008-07-21 ch 10,  | abuseHave to admit, I did laugh alittle. Good update, do it again soon :) |
| Tawny Owl 2008-07-17 ch 1, | abuseThis made me laugh. I loved the comparison of hunting to sex, and the way you mention the general assumption that all female werewolves act like they have pms. I also thought the voice of the narrator was good. He does sound like a geek actually. |
| pinkdottedlily 2008-07-08 ch 9, | abusehope you can write a longer chapter soon :) It was a bit disappointing to only get that little bit but what a pretty good little bit it was! |
| Twilight Starr 2008-07-03 ch 2, | abuseNice addition. Poor geek. ;) ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2008-07-03 ch 1, | abuseAmusing narration. It was enjoyable to read. Nice work. Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a lovely day and a wonderful summer. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| ham337dd 2008-05-11 ch 7, | abuseHi! I'm new to the story (I just read it today). Congrats on getting into college! Hope you eventually find some time to write the next chapter. |
| Celebros 2008-05-11 ch 7, | abuseI'm still laughing about the condom tag. Such a brillant idea! And the rest of the stuff is great too. Good job! |
| RandomActs 2008-04-17 ch 6, | abuseI LOVE this! I am leaving for Wally World right now! Keep up the great work! |
| RandomActs 2008-04-14 ch 5, | abuseHI, I like your character construction and you have set the table really nicely-can't wait to see what you serve! Write on, Macduff! |
| nightmaremuse 2008-04-14 ch 4, | abuseMost amusing. I like reading from guys' perspectives, especially as my life is kinda tinted pink by all the girls around me. You're writing is really engaging and the chapters are getting longer, which is great! More to read for me mwahah |
| pinkdottedlily 2008-04-04 ch 3, | abuseUsually I don't read stories from a guys P.O.V cause it usually involves sweatynes and just all around jockishness which like is to be expected but I was pleasantly surprised. I can't wait to read more--update soon. And you might want to put more in your summary to get more people to read it...short summaries don't give much detail. But other than that this is great start and...interesting...in a good way though. |
| Aleksy Lorraine 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abuseHahahaha. A vegetarian, karma totin' werewolf? Gold! This seems very funny. Not your average everyday werewolf narrator, that's for sure. I don't think I've ever seen anyone take the sexually frustrated, misunderstood mythical wolf road before so kudos. I LIKE YOU HUMOR. GO YOU. :D |