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Reviews For: Six Noisy Sisters

MBJem
2008-04-17
ch 1,
abuseit was great my advise is that in sted of saying on monday on thurseday u could say on monday then the next day that hapend to be tuesday it would make it more interesting for me
Zonne
2008-03-29
ch 1,
abuseThat's just adorable and sweet. Good job. I don't know if you can fix the double spacing. If you did, it would be easier to read. Either way, a darling story I enjoyed very much.
LeenaElle
2008-03-27
ch 1,
abuseAw what a cute story! At the very end, there's a typo, you write tope instead of top. Other than that, I didn't see anything else, but I really thought it was cute! Ok, moving on to your other story!
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