Ah, so sweet! that was funny!

i love your writings! :D

it was great my advise is that in sted of saying on monday on thurseday u could say on monday then the next day that hapend to be tuesday it would make it more interesting for me

That's just adorable and sweet. Good job. I don't know if you can fix the double spacing. If you did, it would be easier to read. Either way, a darling story I enjoyed very much.

Aw what a cute story! At the very end, there's a typo, you write tope instead of top. Other than that, I didn't see anything else, but I really thought it was cute! Ok, moving on to your other story!