YaY!!~ i have an exam tomorrow and i enjoyed reading your chapter again ^^ i see u covered ur tracks with fit of the filler =P heheh, this is a good chapter!! can't wait for the next few!!

OH MY GOODNESS! I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR PART 2 FOREVER!
And it's totally worth it. Not disappointing at all!
WHOOT!

Hmm, I think he just lost his memory, and has this rich relative, and has been brainwashed. lawl. *shrugs* I don't think I like the way this story is going. If Olivers going be all conceited and I'll, I'll probably won't read this. _o_

...this. is. suspense. like. never. before. -_-"
noo!! at least in real books u can just turn the page and get on with it, but here, we actually have to WAIT!! =( *sob*...
that was an excellent filler by the way.

woo-hoo! i can't wait for november then. yay, something to look forward to! anyways, i'll be waiting!!

you have to write part two now! ah! i need to know what's happened with oliver!! anyways, calming down now...i'll be waiting for the next part!!

Thank you very much for this chapter. This is my favourite (British spelling) story so far since joining fictionpress. Plz update as I'm eager to know what happened to Ollie.

OH.

MY.

GOSH.

!

*stands up and spastically applauds*

That was fantastic.

*HUGS*

Oh, wow – i’m so proud of you. You’ve had me hooked the whole way, honey.

And i totally support your decision. =)

And you’re going to have to give me a signed photo and personal message before the end of the year, because ten years down the track no one’s going to believe me when i proudly tell them that i know you. ^^

*sobsob*...until NOVember?! i didn't realise it would be that long!! Well, I absolutely LOVED this chapter...the action was full on! (i would put multiple exclamation marks, but fictionpress would just delete them...) yes my readership will continue and i am probably going to spend a lot of time on the blog commenting ^^...there's a person that keeps beating me to your blog comments! =P so happy i'm first this time! (i think) lol...GBU and take care! u'll do great in ur exams =)
luv heaps,
=P

Thank you very much for this chapter, overall, one fictionpress, you are one of the most talented writers I have ever encountered. Please continue writing.

i love this story!
cant wait for more!
hope you update soon!
--ifly*hugs*

Fantastic chapter – you had me hooked the whole way. =)

A couple of typos – ‘hear’ instead of ‘here’ and ‘advice’ instead of ‘advise’.

But omg, i’m dying to read the next chapter. ^^ You’re seriously milking the suspense for what it’s worth!

Holy crap! That is soo creepy. Earlier today (before I had read this, duh) I had been fishing. And when it comes to fishing, you have plenty of time ot think. I was thinking about this story, and all of a sudden-BAM! It all made sense. I knew Zac was one of the druggies! And that might explain a bit of the hate his sister gives him. And I was planning to ask you if I was right but I see you beat me to it. Oh well.

WHAT DID SHE WRITE!?!? OH MY GOODNESS!

shweet! excellent! i am SO looking forward to the next one! ^-^ this story is going awesome. complex twists and turns. hehehehehe...=P