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PenName SN 2008-06-18 . chapter 1
Doesn't that sort of deplete the reason for vows? The special appeal of reading out words that you have written for them - specifically for them - to let them know how much you love them. They're good words, and I dunno, maybe you wrote them with someone in mind, a girlfriend, a fiancee, or because they popped into your head for no apparent reason. But (yes, of course there's gotta be a but, sorry.) if we all just recited pre-written words... then wouldn't it be meaningless? I don't know, maybe I'm wrong; correct me if I am.
darkflame1516 2008-03-26 . chapter 1
aw...(sniffle)
that's so sweet and beautiful...
how are you pulling all this beauty out of you, did HIMYM put you in this mood?
Skyefire 2008-03-26 . chapter 1
ah sigh...
thank you for that...because i love it...and she will be a lucky girl...

it sounds so musical, so sweet...like a song...in truth, it would be a awesome song...
Tranquil Thorns 2008-03-26 . chapter 1
Aw! So beautiful. (:

Gentle, lovely and very romantic. I really liked the line 'More reasons than stars in the sky. To list them all would take a lifetime.'

Great job!
Requiem for a Decrepit Mind 2008-03-26 . chapter 1
Someday I hope I will be able love that deeply and be loved just as deeply in return. Fantastic.
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