Wow! There's some fantastic description here. The lines you used for the summary..."manicured masks" and "product hair"...very good. There are some issues that make it hard to read--capitalize "maybe" in "maybe people run", and I'd consider putting the girl's thought in italics instead of single quote marks, to make it a little easier on the eyes. "leave them no different to any other human" The "to" there would be better as 'from'.

I do like the symbolism in this, and, as I said, there's some absolutely wonderful description.