 Tranquil Thorns 2008-03-26 . chapter 1Sad, but true in a lot of cases.
I really like how your beginning contrasts your end. Childhood can be pure and simple and 'magic' (depending on the person, of course) but that melts away sooner or later.
'Our neighbours may be our enemies' is also a line that stuck out at me. Neatly phrased.
Great poem! |