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Pesadilla Mortal
2008-05-26
ch 1,
abuseWow, I absolutely loved this. It was strong and I could feel it tapping into my emotions, which is a quality a lot of writers don't possess.

"just kiss me one more time &
maybe we'll go farther this time
i'll take you to a neverland of your
DREAMS) he stole away my
regained sanity"

Probably my absolute favorite part of this piece.
Loved it. =]
♥PM
TheDarkMeadow98
2008-03-28
ch 1,
abuseOh my gosh, that was really enjoyable and i cab totally relate! I love it!!
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