Wow, I absolutely loved this. It was strong and I could feel it tapping into my emotions, which is a quality a lot of writers don't possess.

"just kiss me one more time &
maybe we'll go farther this time
i'll take you to a neverland of your
DREAMS) he stole away my
regained sanity"

Probably my absolute favorite part of this piece.
Loved it. =]
♥PM

Oh my gosh, that was really enjoyable and i cab totally relate! I love it!!