   Shaped-like-pi 2008-07-01 . chapter 1Wow. I'm...I'm...I'm speachless. Wow. |
 starcrossedvoyager 2008-05-15 . chapter 1Awesome poem. |
 Rosie 2008-05-14 . chapter 1 This flows really well and your rhymes are perfect. Love it! |
 RyanKathrynCelia 2008-05-14 . chapter 1It's so sad! I like it - you have a fantastic talent with poetry.
Seriously. I love your poetry :D |
| Gilly 2008-03-26 . chapter 1 It was beautiful, so sad, but very good. |
 Sweet Lemon Effect 2008-03-26 . chapter 1Excellent (though sad) poem! Good job sticking to your rhyming scheme as well. |
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