This was excellent! I really enjoyed it. I liked all the different examples, and especially the gay man & the bully. Great job!

Wow. Charli, that was extrememly good. And I'm not just blowing smoke here. I loved the repetition of "fairytale" that really drove the point home. And all of the examples you came up with. That must've taken ages.

I loved it. :)


~Turtle

*looks dumbfounded* Wow, Charli, wow. What more is there to say? Wow...*looks at computer blankly* wow. wow wow wow wow.

gimpy :)

aw...

The second stanza cracked me up, but the rest of it was so sad...

Charli!

Surprise! This is my favourite piece of yours methinks. I love the repetition of the last line of every verse. Like I said before, you have great talent in the field of poetry :D...

Love ya, and good night,

Alice x

Aw, beautiful! You are an awesome poet. :)

*is in denial* NO I will get a fairytale, I will becasue I'm a Princess and I say so...


Siriusly though, fabulous poem. J'adore

I remember this. I really can't pick a favourite verse, but you have a lot more talent for poetry than me, and I really love the message in this one.

very nice poem.

hey I really like the idea behind this poem. I think you found something really good to work with and a great theme. The rhyme scheme is interesting, but there were parts that seems rhythmically off to me. You have some really great lines, but they don't all flow together. This has a lot of potential; I really like it :) keep up the good work.
~Fida

i liked it an awful lot. i thin it has a fantastic message, and the way that that message was delivreed was flawless!